You completely captured both boys without ever stuttering or leaving me once questioning whether or not they would react in any of the ways they did. You have this beautifully fluid writing style that just lulls you into following it further and further, and yet there were parts of that story that were painful enough that I could only read them a paragraph at a time.
Achingly lovely. Thank you so much for writing this story, because while I read it it owned me and I'm saving it so I can bask in it some more later.
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You completely captured both boys without ever stuttering or leaving me once questioning whether or not they would react in any of the ways they did. You have this beautifully fluid writing style that just lulls you into following it further and further, and yet there were parts of that story that were painful enough that I could only read them a paragraph at a time.
Achingly lovely. Thank you so much for writing this story, because while I read it it owned me and I'm saving it so I can bask in it some more later.