ext_21583 ([identity profile] ruby-jelly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maygra 2007-08-06 12:49 pm (UTC)

I'm breathless...

This is magnificent.

I read it so nervously, a deathfic! I've avoided them after a bad experience - how many tissues does a family box hold, after all? Can't remember breathing, and was totally entranced; you weave a power spell. Tying if off with Missouri hearing but not seeing the car, heart wrenching.

I found this on a rec list, and had to search out the date written; it reads so fresh and powerful. The conflict and resolution in and between the two, paints clearly the journey and co-dependence they appear to be trapped to travel together. You've knocked me out!

Ruby

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