FIC LINK: Shifting Gears, Ch 12 (TF&TF, Dom/Brian) NC18

[maygra]

Title: Shifting Gears, Chapter 12
Universe: TF&TF, Unfinished Business universe. Immediately follows UB.
Pairing: Dom/Brian
Rating: NC18

Many, many thanks to raynedanser for the speedy beta and for holding my hand and patting my head.

The story posted to date can be found here.

Comments

[morbid-poptart.livejournal.com]

Hullo, autie! Sorry for not updating more often. I'm trying to get better about it, though, and I recently updated again, if you're curious about what's going on with me <3

[elfinobsession.livejournal.com]

Another excellent chapter. I love how you don't resolve things in a snap. Dom's past is always there and Letty is a bulldog. Even when she thought she'd put him behind her after last time in the trailer. You make her so human. I love your writing.

Thank you for updating.

FB - Shifting Gears

[magicgerbil.livejournal.com]

Maygra,

This is wonderful. I love how complex it's been, and you've really done a great job with Dom's issues - the boy's really starting to aggravate me. When is he going to pull his head out of his ass and figure out what he really wants? *eyeroll* Men. *shakes head*

A friend went through this not to long ago; being obsessed with a person one minute and the dropping them whenever his 'regular friends' started encroaching. Greg wasn't his boyfriend, he was his dirty little secret.-We've seen that Dom has some sort of feelings towards Brian but really, if it's not enough to withstand his past (Letty) or the "familar" then he should drop it.

Not that I want to see that; B/D is my favorite pairing in this fandom. I guess I'm just feeling a little sorry for Brian. He deserves someone that can commit and stand beside him no matter what, not someone who can't even figure out if he wants to want a guy, let alone fly the rainbow flag in front of friends and family. *sniffles*

Sorry. I guess I'm getting a little too into it, Huh? Oh well, I guess you'll just have to put me out of my misery then and Post More Soon. :D

~gErBiL

Fan Fiction ~ Who needs soap-operas?

A new fan of yours.

[p3rf3ct-drug.livejournal.com]

Got to love the way you're describing everything. I'm not very good in English but your story has stuck in my mind.

You have a pretty good vision of how Dom and Brian would react in situations like the ones you put them in. I'm really curious to know what you have prepared for them in the next chapter(s).