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Title: Shifting Gears, Chapter 12
Universe: TF&TF, Unfinished Business universe. Immediately follows UB.
Pairing: Dom/Brian
Rating: NC18

Many, many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] raynedanser for the speedy beta and for holding my hand and patting my head.

The story posted to date can be found here.

Date: 2005-08-07 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morbid-poptart.livejournal.com
Hullo, autie! Sorry for not updating more often. I'm trying to get better about it, though, and I recently updated again, if you're curious about what's going on with me <3

Date: 2005-08-07 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
hello, my little poptart! I shall be right over to see what trouble you've gotten yourself into.

Date: 2005-08-11 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfinobsession.livejournal.com
Another excellent chapter. I love how you don't resolve things in a snap. Dom's past is always there and Letty is a bulldog. Even when she thought she'd put him behind her after last time in the trailer. You make her so human. I love your writing.

Thank you for updating.

Date: 2005-08-11 11:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you, hon! I''m so glad you liked it.

Letty fasciantes me. She really does, as does her and Dom's very twisty, agressive relationship.

thanks so much for reading!

FB - Shifting Gears

Date: 2005-08-19 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magicgerbil.livejournal.com
Maygra,

This is wonderful. I love how complex it's been, and you've really done a great job with Dom's issues - the boy's really starting to aggravate me. When is he going to pull his head out of his ass and figure out what he really wants? *eyeroll* Men. *shakes head*

A friend went through this not to long ago; being obsessed with a person one minute and the dropping them whenever his 'regular friends' started encroaching. Greg wasn't his boyfriend, he was his dirty little secret.-We've seen that Dom has some sort of feelings towards Brian but really, if it's not enough to withstand his past (Letty) or the "familar" then he should drop it.

Not that I want to see that; B/D is my favorite pairing in this fandom. I guess I'm just feeling a little sorry for Brian. He deserves someone that can commit and stand beside him no matter what, not someone who can't even figure out if he wants to want a guy, let alone fly the rainbow flag in front of friends and family. *sniffles*

Sorry. I guess I'm getting a little too into it, Huh? Oh well, I guess you'll just have to put me out of my misery then and Post More Soon. :D

~gErBiL

Fan Fiction ~ Who needs soap-operas?

Re: FB - Shifting Gears

Date: 2005-08-22 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'm giving Dom a lot of slck becasue it's all very different for him and Brian's not really helping, trying to be a good friend in his own ass-backward kind of way.

I have to admit, I love it when they both want the same thing but are at cross-purposes as to how they get there.

But thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it.

A new fan of yours.

Date: 2005-08-26 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] p3rf3ct-drug.livejournal.com
Got to love the way you're describing everything. I'm not very good in English but your story has stuck in my mind.

You have a pretty good vision of how Dom and Brian would react in situations like the ones you put them in. I'm really curious to know what you have prepared for them in the next chapter(s).

Re: A new fan of yours.

Date: 2005-08-26 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Your english is fine. No worries.

I'm really glad you are enjoying it. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment.

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