Damage, Part 17

[maygra]

Has been added to the website here. Enjoy!

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Thanks for this Maygra!!! I enjoyed as usual.

Catty

[maygra.livejournal.com]

you're welcome,hon! thanks for reading!

[khaleesian.livejournal.com]

Muh. I'm mush. We're turning each other to mush nowadays.

Sexiest line in the last part, "Don't get caught." Heh. I can hear Brian saying that and sounding like pure sex.

[maygra.livejournal.com]

We are. marshmallow enablers, really.

And yes...I'm pretty sure Brian's brain went there the minute Pam walked through the gate -- if not before.

[norah.livejournal.com]

Yay! Love it love it love it! *puts on bookmark list to rec*

One last nitpick, I think you have a C&p typo here:

The last of our stuff is in the washing machine and the dryer is thumping again as he folds towels. I haul myself up on the dryer; it's thumping again while Brian folds towels.

xxoo

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!

And also for the catch. Fixed! (totally missed it -- blearg)

[ixchel55.livejournal.com]

This was the perfect end to a wonderful, angsty, loving story. I'm glad we got to end with fantastic sex because...heh! that's where our boys should always wind up.

I never sent you feedback for the last part and I should have. I love it when all the team is included in a fic. It makes it seem more complete. I loved the interplay out by the pool and the fact that Brian's mom was so cool with everything. The ease between everyone was great. And Letty in a skirt? I soooo have a picture in my mind of her charming the socks off of all the old guys. She's one smart cookie and I have a feeling she could do damn near anything she put her mind to, even when it's clearly against her nature.

Hmmm. I need a 'Women of tF&tF icon'. Must investigate.

Thank you so much for the wonderful ride. I'll be looking forward to your next offering, in the 'Unfinished Business' universe or anywhere else.

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Thanks, D! I'm glad you liked it and yeah, I love the whole crew there too (I just wish I felt more confident writing them!) But they would absolutley be there...

[ohevet-likro.livejournal.com]

Is anyone else having trouble loading the entire file? I get stuck in the middle of a sentence. ("I wake up on my own, more or less. No phones ringing, no sounds beyond what's normal for the neighborhood. It's nearly five t")

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Should be fixed now. Sorry. (might need to clear your caches before reloading.)

[ohevet-likro.livejournal.com]

Thanks, it works now. I'm going to read this tomorrow. Can't wait.

In love with this fic

[senex-incitatus.livejournal.com]

I never watched The Fast and the Furious, but that did not keep me from falling in love with this fic. I love well done first-person narratives, and this very easily got its place among the top five on my favorites list. I would love to read more of your Dom/Brian.

Re: In love with this fic

[maygra.livejournal.com]

thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! and thank you for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

If you haven't foundit, all the rest of my TFaTF fic is at http://assignations.org/maygra/speed

(pplus the stuff thisisbone and I wrote together plus her stand alone stuff.

thanks again!

[anndaydream.livejournal.com]

Poor Brian... he seemed to have such a crappy childhood and yet he still smiles all the time... good that Dom can be there for him as well as the whole team supporting him too... good to see Rome thrown in there too... really enjoyed this... love your writing...