Joy! Rapture! Finally, after reading it four times through, I'm deciding to post a comment (hee. I'm the world's biggest procrastinator... and besides, I just HAD to read it ONE MORE TIME [read-- three more times] before I posted). Can I just say you've floored me with this whole story? The characters are... just perfect. And the thing I love most of all, even though I know I can't expect it out of everything, is that you gave them a mostly happy ending. I mean, sure, there's the trials and tribulations of life to look forward to, but... they're there. And they're together. And, for me, that's all that matters. I love your Dom and Brian so fiercely. This was excellent, hit all the right notes, pushed all of my buttons, the whole thing had me literally spazzing out at points ("OH! No! Don't do that!! No, Dom, NO!! Not now! Nooo.... Oh GOD! Can't you... he's still sick!! AHHHHHHHH!! NOOOOOOO...." and so forth)... excellent, excellent, excellent. Love. This will be one of the things I re-read over and over and over.
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2005-12-20 07:00 pm (UTC)