Wow, this was so awesome, I can't even begin to tell you! *incoherent flailing*
AFSFGJKLKF;
This had just incredible characterisation of Mia and Brian and Dom, beautiful plotting, AND you made Dom/Brian believable. Those two guys... they had a wonderful tension between them that led to a satisfying conclusion. The climax (hah!) of the story with the kidnapping and Tanner pulling strings for them in gratitude was equally satisfying. I have never read a better sequel to movie! *two thumbs up!*
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2009-08-09 12:50 pm (UTC)AFSFGJKLKF;
This had just incredible characterisation of Mia and Brian and Dom, beautiful plotting, AND you made Dom/Brian believable. Those two guys... they had a wonderful tension between them that led to a satisfying conclusion. The climax (hah!) of the story with the kidnapping and Tanner pulling strings for them in gratitude was equally satisfying. I have never read a better sequel to movie! *two thumbs up!*