FIC Link: What it's not (Sam/Dean, Mature Adult)

[maygra]

What it's not
by Maygra

Because being mauled by a bear is a metaphor for so many things.

Incest, adult, 1256 words

thanks to brynwulf and traveller for the beta.

It's not the blood, it's not the fear.


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Comments

[gillianinoz.livejournal.com]

Gorgeous. It just sums up everything I love in their relationship, their bond.

And it's pretty sexy/hot as well. :-)

[maygra.livejournal.com]

thank you very much!

[fiercy.livejournal.com]

Exposing his throat to Dean like he didn't to the maddened, rabid, were-bear, care-bear, whatever-the-fuck DEAD bear

Brilliant.

The sparse quality of this blows me away. Every single solitary word is perfectly balanced. Good Lord, Maygra, I'm also so bad at saying what I mean when I read your stuff. This is just them but saying that doesn't seem like enough, and this is just "The Reason" but saying that isn't enough either and you're just too good.

The beauty of your talent makes me tear up. And that's different from the beauty of each particular work. I wouldn't call this one beautiful. It's raw and harsh and perfect for it. And just *helpless hands*...

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you, sweetie. They break my heart and at the samee time just make me sit back and go, "huh, so that's what love looks like from the outside."

[janissa11.livejournal.com]

*sigh* Lovely as always. Reading this makes me feel as if I've done a couple of double shots of something really high-octane, and I'm just leaning my head back feeling everything.

Awesome.

[maygra.livejournal.com]

thank you hon! (I kind of felt like I was on high octane when I was writing it.)

[chimosa.livejournal.com]

Wow, I liked that a lot and I don't know very much about Supernatural. It was nicely paced and the repetition really worked well in creating a dark and unselfconscious look into an incestuous relationship. Beautiful work.

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I wanted to strip away all the excuses and that was what was left, right, wrong, or indifferent.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_seraphina_/]

omg you keel me DED!!!!
I love that your writing is like thought process...it's not linear but i get it because it's the way my mind jumps all over the place and it's beautiful and they're beautiful and you're beautiful for writing it!

[maygra.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!! Yay for non-linear thinking!

[almostpretty.livejournal.com]

Oh my gosh...yes. I loved this

[maygra.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[copernica3.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. This is beautiful.