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The Fast and the Furious, Dom/Brian, PG, (1,256 words)

[livejournal.com profile] raynedanser asked for Six months after Unfinished Business

There was a sofa on the sidewalk.

Brian eased his car up to the curb and stared at it, recognized it. His sofa, on the sidewalk in front of his house.

And wow, did it look worse in the daylight than it did in the relative shadow of his living room. There was other stuff too. The standing lamp from the corner that hadn't worked since about a month after he'd picked it up at a yard sale and that he'd never managed to find the time to rewire. There was a box of pots and pans and plastic plates, all filched from his father's house in Barstow at some point. Going unused and he doubted his dad would have cared if he'd known. He'd never asked for them back.

The driveway held Dom's car and a longbed truck, still full of boxes. Not a truck he recognized as he walked past it and toward the house.

The doorway was half blocked by more furniture; an end table, a side chair that looked vaguely familiar and a lot more comfortable than the other yard sale find that had occupied the corner of the living room since he'd moved in. There were more boxes on the counter that opened onto the kitchen.

There was music playing, not overly loud, some kind of rock-salsa on the stereo and pretty much every light (that remained) was on. No sign of Dom or the owner of the truck but there was a new-used sofa in the living room, looking overstuffed and proprietary in it's brown leather and deep cushioned solidness.

He kind of wondered if his own kind of thinly stuffed and mass manufactured little loveseat hadn't run to the street on its own in sheer terror. The match of the end table blocking the door was already set at one end with a light that worked blazing cheerfully away.

"Jesus, Vince, it's not going to bite you. Just pick it up." Dom's voice snapped out from the bedroom, sounding equal parts annoyed and amused.

"I don't like messing with other people's stuff," Vince said, a little more muffled, petulant and put upon.

"It's a curtain rod, you moron. And take your shoes off, idiot!"

The smile that had been haunting the corners of Brian's mouth bloomed into a full-blown grin as he edged to the doorway, and peered in.

Vince was just stepping up onto the bed, looking like it might be booby-trapped, using his good arm to lift the long end of the curtain rod. There had already been curtains of a sort, dark sheets that Brian had first tacked up over the bedroom windows and that Mia had finally at least found a rod to thread through the hems of to hang up like actual curtains instead of what she asserted was a college student's easy fix-it. The same rod now held actual heavy drapes to help block out the morning sun. Already in place were a set of sheer panels that would let afternoon light in without surrendering their privacy to the neighbors in the next house over. There was a new dresser too, or rather an older one put into service in addition to the massive hulk of Brian's, which was admittedly, large, but not really large enough for all of his and Dom's clothes. Brian had put his vacated clothes in a shelf in the closet.

The curtain rod was popped into its brackets and Dom stepped down, twitching the fabric into place. Vince got down from the bed more gingerly and stared at Dom like he'd grown two heads.

"What do you think?"

"They're curtains, Dom," Vince said, close to a whine. "What do you want me to say?"

Dom glared and rolled his eyes.

"They look, nice, okay? They're fine," Vince huffed under that glare.

Dom grinned and stepped back. "Not bad."

Brian couldn't stand it. "I don't know. I think that burgundy kind of clashes with the walls."

He thought Vince might have squeaked a little and almost ended up face down on the bed when he jumped. Dom didn't react nearly as visibly, eyes widening for a half-second before narrowing. He cocked his head and glared at Brian. "The walls are white, you dick."

Brian's grin got wider. Dom only scowled harder but there was a glint in his eyes. "What the hell are you doing home?"

Brian shrugged. "Doctor's appointment. Follow up," he added quickly when Dom's expression started to shift. "It's all good, just didn't take as long as I thought it would. Why is all my shit on the sidewalk?"

"Because it's shit," Dom said and Vince shifted uncomfortably, looking between them like he was expecting there to be fists instead of words.

"I…I'm gonna finish unloading the truck," Vince said and Brian had to flatten himself against the wall, lest Vince knock him on his ass trying to get out of the bedroom.

Brian looked around the room again, noting the other small changes; the pictures of Dom's family on the dresser next to the single shot Brian had of his own academy graduation. The set of three prints of antique cars on the wall -- they'd hung in the living room of Dom and Mia's house. Two smaller lamps on the end tables at either side of the bed. The vintage clothes butler that now held Brian's freshly cleaned and still in the bag uniforms. It was a far cry and vast improvement to the undecorated, completely utilitarian way the bedroom used to look.

"I like the curtains."

"Yeah," Dom's scowl eased and he nodded. "Mia made them. Altered them. Used to be in the dining room."

"I like 'em,' Brian reasserted. "Couch too."

"Nice to be able to both sit on it," Dom said, looking not at all worried about whether Brian would approve or disapprove of the changes.

That, more than anything, made Brian feel a little giddy and maybe even a little horny. He stepped further into the room, fingering the heavy metal cross that spilled across the top of Dom's dresser, the links cool on his fingertips.

"What did the doctor say?" Dom asked, also shifting in closer.

"I'm good. No congestion left. BP fine, heart, all of it good. Off the antibiotics, off the physical restrictions. I'm good, Dom. Really good," Brian said. He meant more than his physical health. "I kind of liked those plastic plates, though."

Dom was close enough for his breath to fan warmly over Brian's face. "We can salvage them. They're probably toxic though -- they're older than you are, Bri."

"You're older than me. I haven't noticed any adverse affects," Brian said.

"I'll give you older," Dom said and really, Brian was glad Dom's dresser was as sturdy as it was. It didn't shift at all when Dom pinned him against it and showed him what older and experienced had to offer. Brian was feeling a little flushed and a lot hard when Dom's mouth finally left his. "Anything you want to keep of the stuff I tossed, we'll keep," Dom said.

"Just the important stuff." Brian hooked his fingers into Dom's belt. "I'm good with what's left, and what's new," he said.

Dom's grin took up his whole face when he leaned in again.

"Oh, man! Would you guys not do that in front of me!" Vince snapped from the hallway.

Dom reached over and gave the door a hard shove, shutting it.

"I'm not unpacking the dishes!" Vince yelled.

Neither Dom nor Brian heard him.

Date: 2007-12-21 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chimosa.livejournal.com
Aw man- I had completely forgotten that this series is my favorite in the history of ever. And to see it revisited... it totally made this morning bearable. Of course, now I *hafta* go back and reread the entire series from the beginning *grins*. Seriously, though, thanks for this, it was great!

Date: 2007-12-22 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-21 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bunnysquee.livejournal.com
wow - this was the right mix of sentimental and hot.

thank you for writing and sharing.

Date: 2007-12-22 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you, bunny!

Date: 2007-12-21 02:45 pm (UTC)
ext_3629: blue wallpaper, leafy pattern (misc- face)
From: [identity profile] elizaria.livejournal.com
I just reread the entire series and with this fresh in mind - this sets perfectly amongst the other stories :D The funny, the hot and the fact that Dom's just taking over the house (with! help! from! Mia!) becuase Brian never bothered with it.

*glee*

Nesting makes me happy ♥

Date: 2007-12-22 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
I'm very fond of nesting. Thanks!

Date: 2007-12-21 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com
Oh, so cute. Poor, poor Vince.

Date: 2007-12-22 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Hee. I do like a put upon Vince. Endless hours of amusement. Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-21 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
*sigh* I could read UB 'verse forever, you know. I love how you write them and I ADORE that you included Vince, too, since I have a huge weak spot for him.

Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-21 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delibby.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so very, very glad you requested this.

Date: 2007-12-21 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
heee! Welcome hon. :D

Date: 2007-12-22 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you, bebe!

^__^

Date: 2007-12-21 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kataren.livejournal.com
Oh man, I miss these two. Even now, in my mind, I can see Brian checking out Dom across the room, while ordering a tuna sandwich from Mia no less! Snerk.

And poor Vince. *lols*

Re: ^__^

Date: 2007-12-22 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
I miss them too and am kind of thrilled I could still "hear" them...it's been so long. Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-21 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dine.livejournal.com
oh, I *love* these guys, and this 'verse. wonder if I can fit in a reread before I leave town Sunday?

Date: 2007-12-22 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
LOL!! Maybe if you don't do anything else. Thanks, love!

Date: 2007-12-21 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rae-fa.livejournal.com
I adore this series to much! I think i commented before on 'Uncut and Unmannerly' about reading different stories from the series each week. Nearly a year later, and i'm still reading those stories once a week. (This universe is my happy place...which i guess is kinda strange seeing as how angsty the fics can be.)

And while i love re-reading the older fics...it is very nice to have new material to add to the reading-list :o)

This was wonderful! I absolutely love the domesicity of the fic, the merging of their things, Vince being freaked, and their feelings for each other. *Happy Sigh*

I hope you don't mind me asking...you have this labelled as 'Timestamp Fic #1'...which implies there are more timestamp fics coming - are the rest of them going to be from your SPN fics and other fandoms? Or can i cross my fingers and wish really hard for more from these guys? Either way, you've just made me very happy with this....thank you! ♥

Date: 2007-12-21 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
The ficlets are by request from a previous entry. I think I have another TFATF for five years in the future, but the others are from SPN, Mag7 and original work.

Date: 2007-12-21 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cranberryink.livejournal.com
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ME OMG.

As someone else said, this is my favorite series in the history of EVER and I love this snippet of domestic nesting! ♥♥♥ Thank you so much for revisiting the boys!

Date: 2007-12-22 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you, honey! I'm so glad it made you happy!

Date: 2007-12-21 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delibby.livejournal.com
OMG! Thank you!!!!

I love this series and the way you write the boys. This is great, I love it! Curtain!fic with real curtains! snicker I'm easily amused. It's nesting with a side of sweet make out, and yet in character. Perfect!

Date: 2007-12-22 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
LOL! well, there's a reason we call it curtain fic. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-12-22 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maubast.livejournal.com
w00t. Absolutely fab. As always.

That made my day. Thanks.

Date: 2007-12-22 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
You are very welcome. Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2007-12-22 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unperfectwolf.livejournal.com
Oh man, every time I even see mention of this series I get a little bit flaily. New fic made me actually flail.

Date: 2007-12-22 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
LOL!! as long as you don't hurt yourself. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-22 07:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] banbury.livejournal.com
Oh, such sweet guys! Happy to find them (couldn't sleep until I've finished 'Unfinished business' last night :))

Date: 2007-12-22 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
EEk. Sorry to keep you up late. Thank you for the comment.

Date: 2008-02-10 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] banbury.livejournal.com
Sorry, I know it's over a month, but I had to finish my vid.
I love your series so much - I made a vid about Brian and Dom and actually think about crossover TF&tF/The Sentinel, if you don't mind.

I don't know where to post this vid, so I leave it here, hope you'll read this comment.

DRIVE (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3V5_0R3LoLs)

Date: 2008-02-11 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Oh, this is wonderful!! You should post it over in [livejournal.com profile] quarter_mile.

Date: 2008-02-11 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] banbury.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'll do it.

Date: 2007-12-26 12:55 am (UTC)
ext_9063: (TFatF OTP)
From: [identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com
Oh my god, you actually wrote in an old fandom! *flails* And this is wonderfully fresh and full of THEM, sexy and guy-like and carefully happy, like you just wrote the last chapter a week ago. Happy holidays, darling!

Date: 2007-12-28 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Oh, YAY!! I'm so very glad you liked it. And even more pleased that it didn't come off sounding vastly different than if I had written UB a week ago. That makes me so happy. Happy new year to you!

Date: 2008-01-18 03:26 am (UTC)
ext_2970: (van diesel & paul walker)
From: [identity profile] niciasus.livejournal.com
I didn't know you wrote a sequel to UB. I love the entire series and have read it several times.

I get a big kick on how you write Vince as though if he gets too close to the boyz he may like it too much. He who protests too much. LOL.

I hope you write more TFATF. Brian and Dom is definitely one of fav OTP.

Date: 2008-01-20 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don' tpromise to write more TFATF since I've moved on, but I never sya I won't come back to it either, obviously. *g*

Date: 2008-02-11 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kadymae.livejournal.com
thank you.

What a wonderfully sweet ending and I like how you worked Vince in.

Date: 2008-02-11 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thanks, kadymae. It was fun writing it and I love Vince best when he's both belligerent and long-suffering. *g*

*Shrieks with Excitement*

Date: 2008-02-11 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traveling-storm.livejournal.com
OH MY GOD. MAYGRA WRITING TFATF FIC AGAIN. *dies*

I swear to god, I've read Unfinished Business so many times I can quote entire sections BY HEART and now there's a new snippet for me to salivate over and memorize and SQUEE over to my heart's content!

I love the whole thing, from the little mention of Brian's end table running away by itself, to rian's 'curtains' and Mia's college fix it (so true! So true!), to the exchange between Vince and Dom (I think i giggled myself silly) and the ending banter - God, I love your Vince. I really and truly do. ^^

Thank you, on behalf of all TFATF fans everywhere. You brightened up a lot of days today. ^__^

Re: *Shrieks with Excitement*

Date: 2008-02-11 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Hee!! Thank you, sweetie. I'm so glad you liked it. It was fun writing them again, even if only for something short and sweet.

Date: 2008-02-13 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teamane.livejournal.com
I loved this kind of 'domesticy' between them. It makes everything woth while.
Vince is a great character ^.^ We can't help but love him for his blatant self, lol.
Wonderful fic, as all your other ones. I hope you keep writing about them. I have a few plot bunnies that keep jumping me around and I think I'll give them for adoption. My english is a bit limited.
Dom and Brian don't leave alone! *grin*
:D

Date: 2008-02-18 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2008-02-13 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chase65.livejournal.com
I do love this series and I'm happy to see there's just a little bit more of it.

Date: 2008-02-18 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
Thank you very kindly!

Date: 2008-03-09 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com
Oh, can't believe I missed this earlier. Love,love,love this series and I'm so glad you revisited it, and this was just adorable. I love Dom nesting.

*squishes UB verse and you*

Date: 2008-03-12 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trixxanna.livejournal.com
UB is my favorite Verse out there and just when I was craving some Dom/Bri I find this great new piece that slots perfectly into place and aids in feeding my quirks. Nesting and put upon Vince are what make insomniatic fangirls joyful ^^

I thank you for sharing this great series and universe with all of us, your talents carry me away from everything and provide countless hours of procrastination assistanc as well as pure enjoyment.

Date: 2009-04-11 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wornoutbirks.livejournal.com
I've just spent like...the last four hours reading this series. It's 12:20 am here.

I think I fell in love with them a little bit more after this.

It's just so...them.

Date: 2009-04-22 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anndaydream.livejournal.com
Awww... I just love Vince... he went from asshole to well... less of an asshole... these two together just get cuter and cuter...

Date: 2010-05-14 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jillybean-6939.livejournal.com
Wow! I just finished reading the whole UB universe and I gotta say... em... WOW!! This was really really awesome! I loved the character development and pretty much all of the secondary characters.

Thank you very much for sharing this story!

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